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Post by The Deecho on Mar 7, 2007 0:40:07 GMT -5
wow. That's my favorite. Very, very cool!!
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Mar 15, 2007 18:05:29 GMT -5
Oooo Very nice!
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Post by Iornor on Mar 22, 2007 0:31:05 GMT -5
I liked it!!! but dont agree with ya on "Such a beautiful thing" spiders arent my thing, your poem is awesome though!
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Post by The Deecho on Mar 31, 2007 11:58:23 GMT -5
Lol, I think spiders are hideous too, but in poetic form I can imagine them being made into beautifl things. Hard to explain, but it works.
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Apr 3, 2007 20:25:37 GMT -5
Mmmm...yep yep.
Got anymore Caroline? ;D
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Post by NightStarFairy on Apr 5, 2007 23:09:59 GMT -5
Oh yes, more are on the way!!!
I should have some more soonish to post.
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Post by nakia on Apr 17, 2007 23:37:26 GMT -5
Your poems are great Caroline!!! I am enjoying reading them a lot!!
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Post by aiedail on Apr 18, 2007 0:20:49 GMT -5
yes yes!! very good!!! i like 'em! ;D
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Post by SkinnyGreenMan on May 21, 2007 0:02:55 GMT -5
Those are good, Caroline. I hadn't put much thought to comming to the Poem threads before, but I enjoyed reading the poems. Keep up the good work. Oh, also I'd like to point something out, though it's not about the poems so it's probably off topic: *sbiff* I liked this one alot, very touching Lol, sorry it's just that typeo cracked me up when I read it.
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Post by nakia on May 21, 2007 17:11:55 GMT -5
I like the poem Caroline!! It's really cool!!!
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Post by Mimori on May 24, 2007 17:32:26 GMT -5
Short and sweet! Still creates an interesting image in my mind. Hehe, deceptive little spider eh? It’s nice, the Spider Queen looks innocent/beautiful but is really terrifying, I like I like!
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Post by NightStarFairy on Jun 17, 2007 23:21:16 GMT -5
Thank you for your feedback everyone!! I'm sorry it's taken me awhile to post something here. I don't really like spiders either, lol.
I have two poems to post today. The first one is my very first poem that I wrote a long time ago.
Ice Princess
She skates on the ice, So silent and refined Who can she be? You ask in wonder
She is the Ice Princess of long ago. Great is her beauty, But cold is her heart, She knows not love, Only anger and hate.
Beware of the skater on ice, Do not go near her, She will turn your hear hateful and cold.
This is the tale of the Ice Princess, Her story is now told, Leave her be.
********************************************************* Ok, here is the second one I wrote after "Ice Princess".
Cold Outside
It is cold outside With just a little bit of blue sky. Chilly rain bites at my body, The cold water turned into ice and snow. Perfect time for skating, And playing with my friends. I love the winter time, All sparkly and white, Spending time with my family, Until very late at night.
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Post by aiedail on Jun 18, 2007 15:48:36 GMT -5
I like 'em Caroline! good work!
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Post by SkinnyGreenMan on Jun 18, 2007 23:12:12 GMT -5
Thank you for your feedback everyone!! I'm sorry it's taken me awhile to post something here. I don't really like spiders either, lol. I have two poems to post today. The first one is my very first poem that I wrote a long time ago. Ice Princess She skates on the ice, So silent and refined Who can she be? You ask in wonder She is the Ice Princess of long ago. Great is her beauty, But cold is her heart, She knows not love, Only anger and hate. Beware of the skater on ice, Do not go near her, She will turn your hear hateful and cold. This is the tale of the Ice Princess, Her story is now told, Leave her be. ********************************************************* Ok, here is the second one I wrote after "Ice Princess". Cold Outside It is cold outside With just a little bit of blue sky. Chilly rain bites at my body, The cold water turned into ice and snow. Perfect time for skating, And playing with my friends. I love the winter time, All sparkly and white, Spending time with my family, Until very late at night. Interesting that you decided to post them at the beginning of summer. Lol, good job. I like the second one better of the two.
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