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Post by NightStarFairy on Feb 19, 2007 14:52:51 GMT -5
Yeah... are you there?
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Iornor
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Post by Iornor on Feb 20, 2007 2:22:27 GMT -5
;D I had a hard time writing a poem these past few days but I finally got one!!!! Hope everyone likes!!!!! oh and yes I am here, you are stuck with me Muahahahahahaha!!!! (jk ;D )
Soaring above the sea of white, My joy is above all other heights, Breaking through the morning rays, Dismay starts on her way and is here to stay, She makes me realize it is but a dream, And all I ever hoped for could never be, Dreams begin to fade as I begin to sway, I walk alone on this path everyday, Fear is my ally, Lonesome my friend, Can anyone save me from this nightmare? Chains bound me to my doubt, Bar surround me and Im locked out, Only one questions remains... Who will let me out?
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Mar 2, 2007 18:29:52 GMT -5
Oh thats wonderful Dom! I love it!!! Lol, I'LL LET YOU OUT!!!! heeh So sad, but wonderful.
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Post by NightStarFairy on Mar 3, 2007 23:05:15 GMT -5
I like this one, so sad .
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Post by The Deecho on Mar 7, 2007 0:41:30 GMT -5
Wow. I am very impressed, Dominator!! It was wonderful.
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Iornor
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Post by Iornor on Mar 22, 2007 0:27:53 GMT -5
lol no thanks Kayla, Im good ;D thank ya Kayla!! thank ya Caroline!! thank ya Laura!! *out of breath* more should be here soonish
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Post by NightStarFairy on Apr 5, 2007 23:08:48 GMT -5
yay! more more more more! ;D
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Post by aiedail on Apr 6, 2007 12:01:19 GMT -5
that was really good Dom! I didn't know you wrote poems!!! That's so cool!
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nakia
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Post by nakia on Apr 17, 2007 23:35:14 GMT -5
Hi Dom!! you write amazing poems!! i really liked the one about the arrow
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Post by Touchstone on Apr 19, 2007 23:13:45 GMT -5
Hi Dom, I love the arrow poem!!!
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nakia
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Post by nakia on Apr 24, 2007 15:31:20 GMT -5
I want you to write more poems!!!!!
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Post by aiedail on Apr 24, 2007 15:35:38 GMT -5
yes yes!! write more!! please?
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Post by The Galator on Apr 26, 2007 23:42:34 GMT -5
The arrow poem is wonderful Dom!!!!! i love it!!! i want to get better at writing poems, mine are always so stiff sounding!!! oh well....... anyway, i really love the poems!!!!!
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Post by aiedail on May 14, 2007 13:02:33 GMT -5
more should be here soonish hmmm you wrote that like 2 months ago!! is this still soonish? ;D lol
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Post by SkinnyGreenMan on May 21, 2007 0:00:48 GMT -5
Those are good Dom! I agree with the others that the arrow poem is especially good. Sorry for taking so long to reply - I didn't visit the poem threads when they first came out.
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