Iornor
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Post by Iornor on Jan 12, 2007 16:28:47 GMT -5
Well this is one of my poems, I hope everyone likes it....
Forever you said, Forever you said you will love me, So little time passes and already you love me no more, I thought what we had was real, I thought what we had was true, Was it all for show? Rivers of lies run through your teeth, I see through you I do, and yet I still love you.
How can you say our love is no more? Though you know, Our hearts are one, Day by day, I am consumed, With thoughts of you, and only you, My heart is yours, This you know, Until the day I die, and evermore.
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Post by Dragondrake on Jan 12, 2007 23:41:29 GMT -5
Yay! Another poet! It's kinda fun to just write down your thoughts. It's kinda strange, it's like you have liberty to say what you want just for the sake of poetry, no?
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Post by NightStarFairy on Jan 14, 2007 19:57:55 GMT -5
Brava!!!! I enjoyed this one, can't wait for more!
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Iornor
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Post by Iornor on Jan 20, 2007 4:57:39 GMT -5
Thank you! lol I can hardly call myself a poet, oh yes it is great fun to be able to write your thoughts and feelings. more will come but not sure when. I hope you love 'em!!!!!
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Post by The Deecho on Jan 22, 2007 15:10:49 GMT -5
Very nice job, I liked it! We are getting quite a large group of poets, aren't we?
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Jan 31, 2007 17:59:15 GMT -5
Yes very nice. I liked it too. You should write more Dom. ;D I wish i could join in the poem writing group. But i'm awful at poems.
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Iornor
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Post by Iornor on Feb 2, 2007 1:13:41 GMT -5
Im glad you guys liked it ;D oh yes our group is grow quite big, Kayla I believe you can write good poems. mmm this poem is ok I think there is something missing and sorry its so short (I dont really like writing poems to long) Hope you like it....
An arrow shot through the howling wind, Cries coming from within, Hearts broken, Dreams lost, Roaring thunders roam across, Pain and heartache fill the air, All is quiet and in despair, Dark clouds come rolling in, The darkest moment is finally here, Shouts of suffering are heard afar, and slowly we start to fall, Falling in the deepest hole, Today it has finally won.
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Feb 2, 2007 16:39:41 GMT -5
Ooo i liked that one alot. ;D And who says poems have to be long?
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Post by NightStarFairy on Feb 2, 2007 18:07:44 GMT -5
Yes, a poem doesn't have to be long.
I liked this one ;D. Good Job.
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Iornor
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Post by Iornor on Feb 3, 2007 0:04:06 GMT -5
Thank ya ;D umm I guess poems dont have to be long...nvm then
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Feb 3, 2007 13:51:55 GMT -5
Hehe. So, when are you going to post another one?
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Post by The Deecho on Feb 5, 2007 22:27:42 GMT -5
OOOOOOOOOOOO I loved that last one, Dom. Very impressive.
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Post by NightStarFairy on Feb 10, 2007 0:31:39 GMT -5
Yes, looking forward to more.
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Post by The Deecho on Feb 11, 2007 15:37:27 GMT -5
Which means u NEED TO WRITE MOOOOOOOORREEEE MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Feb 12, 2007 19:37:22 GMT -5
;D........Are you even there Dom?
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