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Post by The Deecho on Feb 21, 2007 18:54:02 GMT -5
Ok, here's a new one that I wrote 'cause I was bored: (it's called "The Cat"):
© February 21, 2007 by The Deecho
In her eyes
The mystery
Of night and mist
and secrets deep
Within lies
A secrecy
Of silent intelligence
and waking sleep
A knowing air
That silent haunts
a lithe prowess
that poised waits
A powered glare
that sees and wants
instinct distress
that loves and hates
Goddess of her mistress
what would pose as that?
A blessing and a hindrance
This creature is the cat.
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Mar 2, 2007 18:25:36 GMT -5
Perfect. I loved it. Very true too lol. Have anymore yet Laura?
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Post by NightStarFairy on Mar 3, 2007 23:04:01 GMT -5
oooo, I love it ;D!!!!!
Can't wait to read more!
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Post by The Deecho on Mar 7, 2007 0:37:33 GMT -5
No more yet, but more are on the way!
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Mar 15, 2007 18:08:11 GMT -5
Oh good. I can't wait ;D
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Post by Iornor on Mar 22, 2007 0:34:20 GMT -5
lol very nice Laura, it was quite wonderful!
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Post by NightStarFairy on Apr 5, 2007 23:09:24 GMT -5
Can't wait to read more!! ;D
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Post by aiedail on Apr 12, 2007 23:30:51 GMT -5
Your poems are awesome Laura!!!! woohoo!!!!
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nakia
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Post by nakia on Apr 17, 2007 23:31:20 GMT -5
Hi !!! i love your poems!!! they are so good!!!!
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Post by aiedail on May 14, 2007 13:00:17 GMT -5
Does The Deecho have any more awesome poems??
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Post by SkinnyGreenMan on May 21, 2007 0:01:15 GMT -5
Those are good Laura. I think I've heard most of them in person before I read through this thread though. My favorite would probably be the one about the circles' ends.
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Post by egyptiankiwi on Dec 16, 2007 18:09:17 GMT -5
Yes that one's very nice. ;D i love your poems Laura. How about some more eh?
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nakia
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Post by nakia on Dec 16, 2007 19:12:32 GMT -5
YES!!!! more!!
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